Walking with you hand in hand,
Along life's ocean shore,
You smile at me and bare your soul,
I want you more and more.
You walk towards the water,
I watch you as you go,
I watch everything about you,
You smile at me and know.
You bring me back a shiny stone,
And say this one's for you!
It's shaped just like my heart,
And I'm giving it all to you.
I steal your lips and kiss them,
You're the best I ever saw,
You hold me close I feel your heart,
I want you more and more.
© 03/2008
13 comments:
Dearest Donnie! =)
What can I say which you already don't know??? You are an excellent person with an exquisite personality, full of pure feelings! and this poem of yours clearly shows all this!!! I loved it! Almost as much as I love you!
Muchos besos!!!!
Hi Dearest Jeannie!
Wow! Thank you so much for the wonderful and too kind words!!
I just always speak and write from the heart, it's all I know!
Muchos Besos my Dearest Friend!! :)
hi, how can I say, jean said very well! Deep, pure and excellent!
I leave a new comment in home is where the heart is.
um abraço!
Thank you Maker!
Abraços
Hi, mr. the brit I wait for new poem! How are you?
Do you like Djavan music? Flor de Liz has a story. And - A new post- "Uma Ponte Colorida" too!
take a looK! thanks, goodnight
where are you?! spinning the wheel
um abraço
Ok, Donnie... enough time out taken already!!! When are you planning to be back??? I MISS YOU!!!!! Muchos besos, my dearest friend!!! =)
very lovely! i have a couple of poems up on my one blog http://herroyalness.blogspot.com (i have 3 blogs that aren't private lol)
Thank you so much ciara!
I will take a look at your Blog of poetry!!
Have a great week!
You write beautifully and with much feeling. Lovely poem. Debs x
Thank you so much Debs!
I just write it all down as I am feeling it in my heart....
Donnie, I write funny poems, silly verses, as you would I am sure expect from me. I have posted 2 poems on my site. Scroll down to labels on the RHS they are alphabetical go to poems. One is a silly jokey one about purple jodphurs (sad but true, though I was sent loads of freebies). The other I wrote for my now husband, two days into dating him. Words do have power, and you have words. Debs x
Wow Debs!
I have just read them and left you some comments!
Truly wonderful and inspiring!
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